Professor Comments:
These implications are well stated, although more detail could be added here. Given the excellent narrative provided on earlier pages, this pages seems a tad sparse by comparison.
You make a great point in the last paragraph, linking this event to what occured in Suadi Arabia. It would help to describe the exact events to which you are referring. Assume your reader does not have all the facts, and curteously provide just enough of the missing ones to keep them with you throughout your argument.
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